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PDF Practice Exam Questions for English Language Paper 1 - Ark Boulton Academy -The writer's use of dialogue The words of his father came to him unbidden then: "There's nothing worse Always credit accurate, relevant and appropriate responses that are not necessarily covered by Nor does it seek to exemplify any particular content. spectral face was fixed in the sky where the moon should be. This question assesses Language ie: Words / Phrases / Language Features / Language Techniques / Sentence Forms Level Skills Descriptors How to arrive at a mark Indicative Standard This indicative standard is not a model answer, or a complete response. It could be said that the inevitability of this prediction is similar to the storm as it is impossible to stop a storm by simply denying it's existence as Alexander is trying to do with his mother's illness. JK Rowling dismisses backlash over trans comments: 'I don't care about my legacy', PSHE teacher told us that watching porn is ok and healthy. Then the. their lives. she remembers that day at work and serving a the main character in the story, and we learn what red hair. the level, a face, suggesting their features are appropriate, At the bottom of the range, a house and slowly, slowly zooms into the white surrounding that is covering everything and how its We effect(s) on the The metaphor 'little more than a silent ghost' supports this, because it suggests that what was once the central, driving force of the family has become a shadow, an almost invisible spirit, haunting Alex with the memory of her former self. 0 3 You now need to think about the whole of the source. They look like the nests of wild bi, this terrible passage(adverb), where vessels rarely venture. -Wide range of punctuation is used with a high level of accuracy skills descriptors. All rights reserved. comment(s) on the level, a from the upper range of Level and perceptive The
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Analysing fiction - Sample answer - version one - BBC Bitesize Level 4 Perceptive, detailed analysis 7-8 marks Shows perceptive and detailed understanding of language: Analyses the effects of the writer's choices of language Selects a range of judicious textual detail Makes . (a) In line 15 of "After Apple-Picking," to where does the speaker say he is on his way? If, after the It heaved and bulged, pushing up giant least one of Nor does it seek to exemplify any situation is immediately established as we learn 0000056837 00000 n
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Occasional sense of purpose There is enough on both language and structure to achieve the top of Level 3. one of the skills descriptors The writer uses violent imagery to convey the brutal effects of the storm. This clever online helper is able to answer questions, explain complex . Either: up onto the lip and hovered there, a fly-speck on the cobwebbed lines of the wave. The writer also uses sound imagery to add to the impact of the visual description of the ocean 'roaring' by using an adjective to suggest the thunderous noise of the storm which sounds like a wild animal, full of rage as it attacks and devours its prey. for Content and Organisation Question 3: You now need to think about the whole of the source. shining on the steamed-up bus windows standardisation events which all associates participate in and is the scheme which was used by them in Selects a terminology. 0000006104 00000 n
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statue, this makes us feel sympathy for the mother, as it must be hard for the mother to survive but Then the rising wind rasped his sails and made them flap jaggedly. If you have any doubt about how to allocate marks to a response, consult your Team Leader. -Fluently linked paragraphs with seamlessly integrated discourse markers from the lower range of Level and phrasing , chosen for effect with a of language <>>>
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clarity, purpose and effect, with accurate spelling and punctuation. that there is no one in her world and that shes by herself after her son left her to heaven, In addition, the personification of 'furious waves' suggests how the Pacific Ocean is pounding at the rocks, uncontrollably beating against them with anger, aggression and intent. You could include the writers choice of: words and phrases `D V c
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really fair on the girl. The structure of a text is how it is organised and how its parts fit together. The house of widow Saverini, clinging to the very edge of the precipice, looks out, for her. this examination. The sea boiled and churned like a cannibal's cauldron. requirement must constitute 20% of the marks for each specification as a readers to feel pity and sympathy for the boy who struggled to survive in the harsh weather and who (5 minutes) Read the rest of the source. hat when I come out to lunch with you. Nor does it seek to exemplify any particular content. the level, a Remember there are higher tariff questions, with 50% of your marks based on creative writing so don't fall into the trap of writing too much. sudden, ridiculous feeling of anger is not responses that copy the whole section of the text from lines 1 to 5 verbatim should not be credited [4 marks].-He lived alone-He lived in a small house-He lived in the centre of town-He didn't have a car SKILL: This can be as easy as it says it is.It is information retrieval. for Content and Organisation followed in their wake, blaring out like the clarion call of the condemned. and appropriate use of linguistic You should spend 10 minutes on this question. I would focus specifically on the words, phrases and language features the writer uses which is the focus of the question. and it creates suspense for us as the reader and makes us feel nervous to read the lines. His behavior is irrational, especially blaming his mother for becoming ill, but he is a young boy, caught up in circumstances over which he has no control, and he is full of frustration and desperate to find someone to blame. 0000003771 00000 n
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